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  • double amphibrach a stanza form using amphibrachic dimeter, - ' - | - ' - ; it consists of eight lines, with the shortened 4th and 8th lines rhymed, and one line (usually the sixth) consisting of a single word. It is a variation of the double dactyl form.

    Example: this rendering of "Humpty Dumpty":

    As Humpty was sitting

    upon a partition,

    he misplaced his balance

    and suffered a fall.

    A sodden, unsightly

    reorganization

    of yolk and albumen

    appeared by the wall.

    Though all the king's horses

    were called to the rescue,

    he couldn't be saved from

    the blistering sun.

    In spite of their dazzling

    equestrianism

    and expert attendance,

    poor Humpty was done.

    Does this have a moral?

    Perhaps that in life as

    in politics sitting

    on fences is fine,

    but slipping a bit is

    anticipatory

    of suddenly facing

    a fatal decline.

    Several pieces in *The Bard & Scheherazade Keep Company* by Jan D. Hodge, are written in this form, including "The Taming of the Shrew" and "Hamlet."

    February 17, 2017

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